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Are there any disadvantages to being intelligent?

김일환/2024-07-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
There is no disadvantages to being intelligent in Koran. Korea isn't a country which exports natural resources. Human resource is major resource in Korea. So, Korea is a strong emphasis on education. Intelligent people are treated as people who put in a lot of effort in Korea. Korean respects people who has jobs such as doctors, lawyers, professors, etc. It is hard to find out disadvantages to being intelligent in Korea.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good Job, Hwanny! You have made good progress. Keep practicing and reviewing lessons to enhance your language skills.
- Teacher Angela


There is no disadvantages to being intelligent in Koran. 
>> There is no disadvantages on being intelligent in Korea. 

Korea isn't a country which exports natural resources. 
>> Korea isn't a country that exports natural resources. 

Human resource is major resource in Korea. 
>> Human resources are a major asset in Korea.

So, Korea is a strong emphasis on education. 
>> So, Korea places strong emphasis on education.

Intelligent people are treated as people who put in a lot of effort in Korea.
>> In Korea, intelligent people are seen as those who put in a lot of effort.

Korean respects people who has jobs such as doctors, lawyers, professors, etc. 
>> Koreans respect people who have professions such as doctors, lawyers, professors, etc.

It is hard to find out disadvantages to being intelligent in Korea.
>> It is hard to find disadvantages to being intelligent in Korea.
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