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What do you see in the market near your house? Describe the market near your house.

차유진/2024-07-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I can see tteokbokki and station and small mart. I usually use the market only to go to the station. The market is be famous. The market was also on tv
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few and minor revisions made. Have a good one!  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                             What do you see in the market near your house? Describe the market near your house.



I can see tteokbokki and station and small mart.
>> I can see a tteokbokki stall, a train station, and a small mart.

I usually use the market only to go to the station.
>> CORRECT~~

The market is be famous.
>> The market is famous. 

The market was also on tv
>> The market was also featured on TV.

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