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Do you think electricity is the greatest invention ever?

박소은/2024-07-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes, because if we don't have electricity we can't see.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Sunny!
This is a good ending to this week.
I am expecting that you will maintain that level of quality in your work.
We have come a long way and we have to keep up the good work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

	Hello Sunny! This is a good ending to this week. I am expecting that you will maintain that level of quality in your work. We have come a long way and we have to keep up the good work.^^ ~~ Teacher Sharon

Yes, because if we don't have electricity we can't see.

>> Yes, because if we don't have electricity we can't see anything.