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Who is your favorite singer, and why do you like her?
김명기/2024-07-05
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite singer is Jaehun Choi.
His music genre is rock ballad and he doesn't dance.
His voice is very powerful and when I listen to his songs, I feel refreshed.
I like all of his songs, but my favorite song is "Letter."
Its highest note is C in the 3rd octave.
I would like to sing this song, so I have tried to sing it many times, but it's still difficult.
Recently, Mr. Choi has been less active in music, so it's a shame.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, MK!
I tried to search the name of your favorite singer but wasn't able to find it. Thank you for sharing the name of your favorite singer and also your favorite song. I will try to listen to it once I find it!
- T. Caitlyn
My favorite singer is Jaehun Choi.
>> CORRECT
His music genre is rock ballad and he doesn't dance.
His music genre is rock ballad and he doesn't dance.
>> CORRECT
His voice is very powerful and when I listen to his songs, I feel refreshed.
His voice is very powerful and when I listen to his songs, I feel refreshed.
>> CORRECT
I like all of his songs, but my favorite song is "Letter."
I like all of his songs, but my favorite song is "Letter."
>> CORRECT
Its highest note is C in the 3rd octave.
Its highest note is C in the 3rd octave.
>> CORRECT
I would like to sing this song, so I have tried to sing it many times, but it's still difficult.
I would like to sing this song, so I have tried to sing it many times, but it's still difficult.
>> CORRECT
Recently, Mr. Choi has been less active in music, so it's a shame.
Recently, Mr. Choi has been less active in music, so it's a shame.
>> CORRECT
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