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What is a relaxing vacation for you and where would it be

현무/2024-07-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My vacation has to be a place where I am alone, no matter where it is in the world. If possible, it would be better in Maldive or Northern Europe.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Kyle! Great job in answering this homework. It would be really awesome to go on vacation!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

My vacation has to be a place where I am alone, no matter where it is in the world.
>>CORRECT
OR >> My vacation has to be somewhere I can be alone, no matter where it is in the world.

If possible, it would be better in Maldive or Northern Europe.
>> If possible, it would be better in the Maldives or Northern Europe.