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What do you think of people who always work out, and how does this affect a person's mood?

현무/2024-07-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
i think always work out people , It is expected that you will be healthier than other people and that your stress relief will be greatly improved.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kyle! Job well done on sharing your thoughts about working out and how it would affect people's moods. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

i think always work out people , It is expected that you will be healthier than other people and that your stress relief will be greatly improved.
>>  I believe that people who work out regularly are likely to be healthier than others and will experience significant stress relief.
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