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Do you ever think about how precious water is? Why is it important?
박소은/2024-07-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I had think about how precious water is in the school.
I think it is important because we can't live without water we will die fast if we don't drink water.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Sunny! I like the fact that I could understand the idea that you wanted to express. It means that you have a good sense in choosing the right words and expressions. We are going to work on your skills in sentence construction. We need to focus on sentence patterns. Let's work hard! ~~ Teacher Sharon |
Yes, I had think about how precious water is in the school.
>> Yes, I had thought about how precious water is in school.
I think it is important because we can't live without water we will die fast if we don't drink water.
I think it is important because we can't live without water we will die fast if we don't drink water.
>> I think it is important because we can't live without water and we will immediately die if we don't drink water.
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