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How would you recommend treating a cold?

김일환/2024-07-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When we catch a cold, we don't need to take medicine. We need to take some rest and drink planty of water. When I visited in Germany, there is on medicine for recovering from the cold. German people just drink hot tea and take vitamins. If we recover from a cold, our bodies know how to overcome it. Even if we get infected, we have no symptoms.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Excellent work, Hwanny! Please take note of the corrections given below. It will be a big help with your English fluency. 
- Teacher Angela

When we catch a cold, we don't need to take medicine. 
>> CORRECT

We need to take some rest and drink planty of water. 
>> We need to get some rest and drink plenty of water.

When I visited in Germany, there is on medicine for recovering from the cold. 
>> When I visited Germany, there was no medicine for recovering from a cold.

German people just drink hot tea and take vitamins. 
>> CORRECT

If we recover from a cold, our bodies know how to overcome it. 
>> Once we recover from a cold, our bodies already know how to overcome it.

Even if we get infected, we have no symptoms.
>> Even if we get infected, we may have no symptoms.
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