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What are the things you do after school? Write at least two.

/2024-07-04

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I always go to Taekwondo academy after school because I learn Taekwondo. I eat some snacks and watch tv at home for 1hour, and I study Korean language, mathematics, science and English every day.
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                                     What are the things you do after school? Write at least two.


I always go to Taekwondo academy after school because I learn Taekwondo.
>> I always go to Taekwondo academy after school because I'm learning Taekwondo.

I eat some snacks and watch tv at home for 1hour, and I study Korean language, mathematics, science and English every day.
>> I eat some snacks and watch TV at home for 1 hour, and study the Korean language, mathematics, science, and English every day.