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김순님/2024-07-04

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Eating salad only a time a day is good for way of diet, not every meals. Thesedays many salad's restaurants are increasing in korea. I think we have to have enough nutrition from the other 2 meals. Most of all The lack of nutrition can make my body muscle weak. So we should ajust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Ms. Sunny!

Eating salad alone can be healthy as long as it's well-balanced and provides a variety of nutrients. Incorporating a range of ingredients ensures you get a mix of vitamins, minerals, and other essential nutrients your body need, that's according to Google, but personlaly , I don't eat salad alone hahaa.

Have a good day!

Aki~

Eating salad only a time a day is good for way of diet, not every meals.

>>> Eating salad only one time a day is a good way of diet but not every meal.

These days many salad's restaurants are increasing in Korea.

>>> These days, salad restaurants are increasing in Korea.

I think we have to have enough nutrition from the other 2 meals.

>>> CORRECT!

Most of all the lack of nutrition can make my body muscle weak.

>>> CORRECT!

So we should ajust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.

>>> So we should adjust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.