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What is the best thing about the month of July? Write at least two.

차유진/2024-07-02

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I think the best thing about the month of July is raining days because raining days are fun. And I'm happy because I have a summer vacation in July.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few and minor revisions made. Have a good one!  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                           What is the best thing about the month of July? Write at least two.


I think the best thing about the month of July is raining days because raining days are fun.
>> I think the best thing about the month of July is rainy days because they are fun.

And I'm happy because I have a summer vacation in July.
>> OR: Also, I have a school vacation this month so I'm happy. 
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