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주영민/2024-07-02

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Q: What is the best-selling drink in your coffee shop? Why do people prefer that? A: The best-selling menu is iced americano. I think Koreans are addicted to caffeine and ice. And in June, watermelon juice came out new summer menu and many people visit. So I have a lot of work 🥲

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hi Yeong Min!

I guess the good thing if most people order the same item is you can already predict what to do. However, it could also be the caused of unfamiliarity to other menus.

thanks for sharing this.

T. Aki~

The best-selling menu is iced americano. I think Koreans are addicted to caffeine and ice.

>> CORRECT!

And in June, watermelon juice came out new summer menu and many people visit.

>>> In June, watermelon juice came out new summer menu and many people visited.

So I have a lot of work

>> CORRECT!