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What are the best ways to avoid getting sick?

이진태/2024-07-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I don't face any stress and hard work, we would live longer than now. I think that the human do too many works. we should work less than now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for doing the homework and sharing the best ways to avoid getting sick. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I don't face any stress and hard work, we would live longer than now.
>>If we didn't face any stress or hard work, we would live longer than we do now.

I think that the human do too many works. we should work less than now.
>>I think humans do too much work. We should work less than we do now.
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