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Is mental health more important than physical health?

이진태/2024-07-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that the physical health is more important than mental health. physical health is real health. However, mental health is really important. These days, there are many thesis about relation the mental health between physical health.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Awesome job today! You were able to share your opinion about mental and physical health. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think that the physical health is more important than mental health. physical health is real health.
>>I believe that physical health is more important than mental health because physical health is tangible. 

However, mental health is really important.
>> CORRECT
OR >> However, mental health is also crucial.

These days, there are many thesis about relation the mental health between physical health.
>>These days, there are numerous studies exploring the relationship between mental and physical health.
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