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What are the consequences of doing homework in a dishonest way?

정선아/2024-07-02

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A student did homework in a dishonest way, the teacher will know someday. The teacher will call the student's parents. That's a punishment. In the student's case, that way might not be helpful to the student.

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Hi, Angela!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. A student did homework in a dishonest way, the teacher will know someday.

>>If a student did his/her homework in a dishonest way, the teacher will know someday.

2. The teacher will call the student's parents.

>>Then, the teacher will call the student's parents.

3. That's a punishment.

>>CORRECT!

OR>>That's his/her punishment.

4. In the student's case, that way might not be helpful to the student.

>>In the student's case, that way might not be helpful to him/her.