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How do you celebrate small successes or milestones as you progress through a project?

박소은/2024-07-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When a project is finished, we have a small celebration party with colleagues at a bar or restaurant. And we are encourage each other and never forget to say thank you for hard working.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Anna!
That sounds like a great way to celebrate and appreciate everyone's hard work! Keep up the good work.
Have a good day!
~Kelly^^
When a project is finished, we have a small celebration party with colleagues at a bar or restaurant.
>> Correct
OR:
>> When a project is completed, we have a small celebration with colleagues at a bar or restaurant.
And we are encourage each other and never forget to say thank you for hard working.
>> We encourage each other and never forget to say thank you for the hard work.
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