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What is a delectable food you've tasted that you cannot forget?

김명기/2024-07-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The most delectable food I've ever had was a pizza located in Busan. The name was Leejaemo Pizza, in front of the Busan station. There were lots of people waiting, so I booked it for takeout. I could pick it up after 1 hour. It was a basic pizza. Wow... the cheese was so tasty. It had sufficient cheese, and I could say it was really delicious. The flavor was mild, not strong. While I am writing this sentence, I feel I want to eat it again.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, MK!
While reading your homework, it made me crave pizza! I'm imagining the way you described that pizza because it sounds so delicious. According to you, there were a lot of people ordering it as well, so it must be really worth it. I hope they will open a branch in my country so I can try it too!
- T. Caitlyn
The most delectable food I've ever had was a pizza located in Busan.
>> CORRECT
The name was Leejaemo Pizza, in front of the Busan station.
>> The name was Leejaemo Pizza, located in front of Busan Station.
There were lots of people waiting, so I booked it for takeout.
>> There were lots of people waiting, so I placed an order for takeout.
I could pick it up after 1 hour.
>> CORRECT
It was a basic pizza. 
>> CORRECT
Wow... the cheese was so tasty.
>> CORRECT
It had sufficient cheese, and I could say it was really delicious.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: It had plenty of cheese, and I must say, it was really delicious.
The flavor was mild, not strong.
>> CORRECT
While I am writing this sentence, I feel I want to eat it again.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: As I write this, I find myself wanting to eat it again.
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