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Is there anything in particular you are looking forward to this weekend?

박소은/2024-06-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, It's my graduation school vacation, so I'm planning to rest all weekend.. Currently, I am working and studying at the same time, and I am always busy and tired in order to achieve good results from work and study.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Happy Monday, Anna!^^
Enjoy your well-deserved break! Balancing work and studies must be challenging, but your dedication will surely pay off. Make sure to take some time to relax and recharge this weekend.
~Kelly
Yes, It's my graduation school vacation, so I'm planning to rest all weekend.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Yes, it's my break from graduate school, so I plan to rest all weekend.

Currently, I am working and studying at the same time, and I am always busy and tired in order to achieve good results from work and study.

>> Correct

OR:

>> Currently, I am juggling work and studies simultaneously, which leaves me constantly busy and tired in my pursuit of achieving good results.

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