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What is the importance of finding your passion?

현무/2024-06-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

i think passion is energy , no passion no energy , no energy no life . so i think passion very important .

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Kyle! Thank you for taking the time to do the homework. Keep it up!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

i think passion is energy , no passion no energy , no energy no life . so i think passion very important .

>> I believe passion is energy; without passion, there is no energy, and without energy, there is no life. Therefore, I consider passion to be very important.