Many years ago,we helped a family , one boy, two girls who lived near my husband"s office.
They had been going to kindergarten and elementary school.
Their parents were already divorced,father was sick,grandmother sold vegetables at a market.
We had known them from the community center.
We helped them until high school graduation.
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Just be careful of you punctuation marks.
Learn to separate ideas.
Overall, you did well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Many years ago,we helped a family , one boy, two girls who lived near my husband"s office.
>> Many years ago, we helped a family , one boy, two girls who lived near my husband's office.
They had been going to kindergarten and elementary school.
>> Correct
Their parents were already divorced,father was sick,grandmother sold vegetables at a market.
>> Their parents were already divorced. The father was sick and the grandmother sold vegetables at a market.
We had known them from the community center.
>> Correct
We helped them until high school graduation.
>> Correct