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How does jealousy affect people?

신봉규/2024-06-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that jealousy reduce self-control. so it makes mistake of getting angry at the other people.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for taking time to do the homework! I agree with your answer. I hope we can talk about it more in class. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think that jealousy reduce self-control. so it makes mistake of getting angry at the other people.
>> I believe that jealousy reduces self-control, leading to mistakes such as becoming angry with others.
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