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What do you consider to be your good and bad qualities?

정선아/2024-06-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My strongest is sincerity when I work. Also, I try to do my best if I have my responsibility. Many people trust to my work. My bad quality is making a decision quickly, because, I don't like taking a time. Sometimes it leads to errors.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Angela! It's amazing how you put your heart in everything you do. Thank you for sharing!

-T.Sonny

My strongest is sincerity when I work.

>>My strongest quality is having sincerity when I work.

Also, I try to do my best if I have my responsibility.

>>Also, I try to do my best if I have a responsibility.

OR. When I am given a responsibility, I always try to give it my all.

Many people trust to my work.

>>Many people trust my work.

OR. Many people put their trust on me.

My bad quality is making a decision quickly, because, I don't like taking a time.

>>My bad quality is making decisions quickly which I do because I don't like waiting.

OR. I think, a bad quality that I have is impulsiveness; I hate waiting for too long.

Sometimes it leads to errors.

>>CORRECT.