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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the countryside?

김일환/2024-06-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I am in countryside, I feel relaxed. When I drive, I can feel it intensively. There is no traffic-jam. There is a few-cars in a parking lot. I don't need to worry to park a car. The price of life also is cheaper than urban area. But, living countryside has disadvantages. One of them is lacking of amenities. There is no big hospital. If I have serious disease, I have to move to urban area. Supermarket also isn't in countryside. When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessaries.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hwanny! Thanks for always sharing your thought through your homework. Keep it up! Happy weekend.
- Teacher Angela

When I am in countryside, I feel relaxed. 
>> When I am in the countryside, I feel relaxed.

When I drive, I can feel it intensively. 
>> When I drive, I can feel it intensely.

There is no traffic-jam. 
>> There are no traffic jams.

There is a few-cars in a parking lot. 
>> There are a few cars in the parking lot.

I don't need to worry to park a car. 
>> I don't need to worry about parking the car.

The price of life also is cheaper than urban area. 
>> The cost of living is also cheaper than in urban areas.

But, living countryside has disadvantages. 
>> But living in the countryside has disadvantages.

One of them is lacking of amenities. There is no big hospital. 
>> One of them is the lack of amenities, such as a big hospital.

If I have serious disease, I have to move to urban area. 
>> If I have a serious disease, I have to move to an urban area.

Supermarket also isn't in countryside. 
>> There are no supermarkets in the countryside either.

When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessaries.
>> When I go to the supermarket, I have to buy a large amount of necessities.
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