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류건우/2024-06-28

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Q: What's the most tiring part of being a leader? A: I think it's when the followers are not following. If the members are not following the leader, then they can't work properly, but if the leader wants to run the team, it would be tiring. Also, it would be tiring if members are against each other.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I think it's when the followers are not following.

>>CORRECT!

2. If the members are not following the leader, then they can't work properly, but if the leader wants to run the team, it would be tiring.

>>If the members are not following the leader, then they can't work properly. But if the leader wants to run the team by himself, it would be tiring.

3. Also, it would be tiring if members are against each other.

>>CORRECT!

OR>>Also, it would be tiring if members go against each other.