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Do you believe that people are more honest with friends or with family members?

안재윤/2024-06-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think it depends on how good relationship they have with their families. As individuals grow up, some become very independent and are likely to closer with their friends. Some are very family person, and they believe in their family more than any. I think whom they feel closer, they could become more honest, because they know just becoming honest would not ruin their relationship.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Anna! You're right. Trust and closeness with family or friends can influence how honest people feel they can be.

~T. Jenna

I think it depends on how good relationship they have with their families.

>>I think it depends on how good their relationship with their families is.

As individuals grow up, some become very independent and are likely to closer with their friends.

>>As individuals grow up, some become very independent and are likely to be closer with their friends.

>>As individuals mature, some cultivate a strong sense of independence and tend to gravitate towards closer relationships with their friends.
Some are very family person, and they believe in their family more than any.

>>Some are very family-oriented, and they believe in their family more than anything else.
I think whom they feel closer, they could become more honest, because they know just becoming honest would not ruin their relationship.

>>I think they would become more honest with those they feel closer to, because they know that being honest wouldn't necessarily ruin their relationship.