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김순님/2024-06-28

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There is no way I can't speak english in front of people in korea. I've never seen people who speak english like levels of me at a cafe. All of them can have a lot of ability to speak english. Korean more intends to considerate others seeing than other country's people. Only I can do is I have to improve my english.
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Ms. Sunny!
I think it has something to do with your personality. You don't want the attention of people to be on you. 
Anyway, I hope that one time you will be confident to express your thoughts in English. Happy LearninG!
Aki~

There is no way I can't speak english in front of people in Korea.
>>>' There is no way I can speak English in front of people in Korea.

I've never seen people who speak english like levels of me at a cafe.
>>> I've never seen people who speak English like levels of me at a cafe.

All of them can have a lot of ability to speak English.
>>> All of them has a lot of ability to speak English.
>>>  All of them can speak English well.

Korean more intends to considerate others seeing than other country's people.
>>> Korean more intends to considerate others seeing than other country's people.

Only I can do is I have to improve my English.
>>> The only I can do is I have to improve my English.
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