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현무/2024-06-27

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i think jealousy sometime useful , sometime bad , Because I can't accept reality, so difficult to live

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Hey Kyle! Thank you for doing the homework and sharing your idea about how jealousy affects people. Keep it up^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

i think jealousy sometime useful , sometime bad , Because I can't accept reality, so difficult to live

>> I think jealousy can sometimes be useful, but other times it can be harmful. When I can't accept reality, it makes life difficult.