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What do you think is the most beautiful song in the world? Why?

차유진/2024-06-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think the most beautiful song is "They're all flowers" because the song's lyrics are beautiful. https://youtu.be/P9u5wxrHUvk?feature=shared Even if it blooms in the mountains, it's a flower Even if it blooms in the field, it's a flower Even if it blooms on the streets, it's a flower They're all flowers Even if it blooms anywhere Even if it blooms as it looks Even if it blooms with no names They're all flowers. (^_^)

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Good evening, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few and minor revisions made.

Have a good one!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What do you think is the most beautiful song in the world? Why?

I think the most beautiful song is "They're all flowers" because the song's lyrics are beautiful.

>> I think the most beautiful song is "They're All Flowers" because the lyrics are beautiful.

Even if it blooms in the mountains, it's a flower Even if it blooms in the field, it's a flower Even if it blooms on the streets, it's a flower.

They're all flowers Even if it blooms anywhere Even if it blooms as it looks Even if it blooms with no names They're all flowers.

>> CORRECT~~

>> NOTE: To be honest, it's hard to correct lyrics because they don't follow grammar rules.