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정일환/2024-06-27

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Q : Are there any traditional drinks from your culture or country that you enjoy? What is it and why? A : The representative of traditional culture is the "ondol" system. The "ondol" system is a heating system that warms the entire floor of a room. It can keep you warm in the winter.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Steve!
That sounds fascinating! It must be really effective for keeping warm during the winter. Thanks for sharing about this.
~ Teacher Maxine

The representative of traditional culture is the "ondol" system.
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The "ondol" system is a heating system that warms the entire floor of a room. 
>> CORRECT

It can keep you warm in the winter.
>> It can keep you warm in winter.
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