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김도연/2024-06-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Is having a goal in life effective in becoming successful? I think that's right. It is because I think working with a plan helps you achieve your goal rather than working without a plan

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jessica!

Oh. Well, having a goal will give us a vision for the future we want for ourselves. You have to set a goal to reach it or else, you will get lost. ~ Teacher Trixia

Content:

I think that's right.

- CORRECT.

>>> Absolutely.

It is because I think working with a plan helps you achieve your goal rather than working without a plan

- It is because I think working with a plan helps you achieve your goal rather than working without a plan.