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Is mental health more important than physical health?

현무/2024-06-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
no , i think about life is physical health important , but in live mental health is important .
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Kyle! Thank you for putting in some time to do the homework. Great job!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

no , i think about life is physical health important , but in live mental health is important .
>> I think physical health is important in life, but mental health is even more important.
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