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The Difficult thing about learning english

이한솔/2024-06-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
the most important thing about learning english is speaking with confidence although i'm not good at speaking english. innow that the most important thing is confience but i felt like my perfectionism is interrupting me to speak english. so i want to overcome this weak through this lesson.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey, Han Sol. I appreciate that you check the feedback and the homework topic. Thank you for sharing your opinions. I hope you will be able to gain your confidence back through this class. Keep the essays going. I'll talk to you in the next class. ~Jane c",) 


the most important thing about learning english is speaking with confidence although i'm not good at speaking english. 
>> The most important thing about learning English is speaking confidently, although I'm not good at speaking English. 

innow that the most important thing is confience but i felt like my perfectionism is interrupting me to speak English. 
>> I now know that confidence is the most important thing, but I feel like my perfectionism is keeping me from speaking English fluently. 

so i want to overcome this weak through this lesson.
>> So, I want to overcome this weakness by taking this class.

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