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류건우/2024-06-26

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Q: What would you like to purchase if ever you win the lottery? A: I'd like to just save it right then. I don't want to spend my money right then, and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want if I save it. Also, I don't really have something I want to buy right now,

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I'd like to just save it right then.

>>I'd like to save it right away.

2. I don't want to spend my money right then, and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want if I save it.

>>I don't want to spend my money right away and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want to if I save it.

3. Also, I don't really have something I want to buy right now.

>>CORRECT!