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The influence of influncers

양기연/2024-06-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
As long as we live in the digital era, we are likely to be affected by a wide range of influncers. Through seeing their contents,we get information in many aspects of life. But sometimes we have severe risks to be exposed to wrong or fake information.
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Hi, Gi Yean!
I agree that because of technology, the influence of influencers cannot easily go away. So, I think the best way is to adapt to it and also be very vigilant in checking whether their contents are credible or not.
-T. Caitlyn
As long as we live in the digital era, we are likely to be affected by a wide range of influncers. 
>> CORRECT
Through seeing their contents,we get information in many aspects of life. 
>> By viewing their content, we gain information on many aspects of life.
But sometimes we have severe risks to be exposed to wrong or fake information.
>> CORRECT
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