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What fruit or fruits that aren't available in Korea would you want to try? Why?

차진혁/2024-06-25

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I want to eat fruit is kukamelon because I like cucumber and melon. And I want to eat fruit is baobab fruit and po-po fruit because I don't have ate them, and I'm curious about the taste. These aaren't all available in Korea.

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Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition. Thank you for sending it. Please go over the revions given below, such as the English names of the fruits cucumber-melon and pawpaw. Good night and see you on Friday!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What fruit or fruits that aren't available in Korea would you want to try? Why?

I want to eat fruit is kukamelon because I like cucumber and melon.

>> One fruit I want to eat is cucumber-melon because I like cucumber and melon.

And I want to eat fruit is baobab fruit and po-po fruit because I don't have ate them, and I'm curious about the taste.

>> Other fruits I want to try are baobab and pawpaw because I haven't tried them yet, and I'm curious about the taste.

These aaren't all available in Korea.

>> These fruits are all not available in Korea.