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류건우/2024-06-25

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Q: Do you prefer online or offline classes? Why? A: For my grades, I prefer offline classes. If I have an online class, there are too much disturbances near me, so I can't concentrate on the class, and that'll make my grade worse. But for convenience, I prefer online classes because I don't need to move.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. For my grades, I prefer offline classes.

>>CORRECT!

2. If I have an online class, there are too much disturbances near me, so I can't concentrate on the class, and that'll make my grade worse.

>>If I have an online class, there are too many disturbances near me, so I can't concentrate in class, and that'll make my grade worse.

3. But for convenience, I prefer online classes because I don't need to move.

>>CORRECT!