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Do you wish you you were younger or older? Why?

박소은/2024-06-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I like my old because if I'am old or young I didn't haved met my friends.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Look at the new pattern below.
It's more complicated than usual.
However, with practice, you'll get it eventually.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like my old because if I'am old or young I didn't haved met my friends.
>> I like my age now because if I'm younger or older, I wouldn't have met the friends that I have now. 
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