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Is there a difference between being thin and being healthy? Which one is better?

박소은/2024-06-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
To me I like being healthy because if we are thin we can't be healthy. And being healthy is good.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Look at the way you start your sentences.
Make them simpler and more direct.
~~ Teacher Sharon
To me I like being healthy because if we are thin we can't be healthy.
>> For me, I like being healthy because if we were thin we wouldn't be healthy.
And being healthy is good.
>> Being healthy is good. 
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