I suppose that our character is a little bit predetermined. We inherited our physical and characteristic trait from our parents. It is difficult to change. But if I really try to change the thing that I don't like, I can fix just a little bit. We can't change basic frame. When I am a kind of stubborn person, I will try not to stick to my opinion. But eventually I will go back to my thoughts,even though I feel obliged to accept different opinion.

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We can't change the basic frame.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

When I am a kind of stubborn person, I will try not to stick to my opinion.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

 But eventually I will go back to my thoughts, even though I feel obliged to accept the different opinion.

>>> CORRECT~!^^