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Do you think Korean meals are healthy? Why or why not?

김명기/2024-06-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes, I think Korean meals are healthier than meals from other countries. The main meal in Korea is rice. Rice raises blood sugar less than flour. Additionally, there are various side dishes. Assorted side dishes contain sufficient nutrients.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

I couldn't agree more! Side dishes in Korea are various and most of the time, are vegetables, so we really think it's healthy since it balances the main dish and provides a more balanced diet.

- T. Caitlyn

Yes, I think Korean meals are healthier than meals from other countries.

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The main meal in Korea is rice.

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Rice raises blood sugar less than flour.

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Additionally, there are various side dishes.

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Assorted side dishes contain sufficient nutrients.

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