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Who else is better than Mr. Yun as a president? Explain your answer.

차진혁/2024-06-23

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I think first is Roh Moohyun is better than Mr. Yun as a president because he only thinks Korean people. Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. Yun because he enforced Rok-US allince and helps Ukraine.

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Who else is better than Mr. Yun as president? Explain your answer.

I think first is Roh Moohyun is better than Mr. Yun as a president because he only thinks Korean people.

>> First, I think Roh Moohyun was better than Mr. Yun as a president because he only thinks of the Korean people.

Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. Yun because he enforced Rok-US allince and helps Ukraine.

>> Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. Yun because he enforced the Rok-US alliance and is helping Ukraine.