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Traveling with my husband

양기연/2024-06-21

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There are several advantages when I travel with my husband. First, I can learn many things about the destinations I travel from him, including the place's history. My husband majored history and was a history teacher, so he has huge amount of knowledge about the world history. Second he likes to try new experiences such as eating local food or doing exciting activities. With him,I can enjoy some activities that otherwise I don't even try to do. Thirdly he is open to any kinds of food or activities, so he almost agree with my plans or ideas. Lastly he has a strong interest in learning and speaking foreign languages. Thanks to him, we have little problem communicating locals who don't speak English.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

It's really nice to know that you and your husband have a lot of things in common when it comes to traveling. Also, it's nice that when you are traveling, you are not just enjoying but also learning from your husband about the place and its history. I hope you have more travel adventures together.

- T. Caitlyn

There are several advantages when I travel with my husband.

>> CORRECT

First, I can learn many things about the destinations I travel from him, including the place's history.

>> First, I can learn many things about the destinations I travel to from him, including the place's history.

My husband majored history and was a history teacher, so he has huge amount of knowledge about the world history.

>> My husband majored in history and was a history teacher, so he has a huge amount of knowledge about world history.

Second he likes to try new experiences such as eating local food or doing exciting activities.

>> CORRECT

With him,I can enjoy some activities that otherwise I don't even try to do.

>> With him, I can enjoy some activities that otherwise I wouldn't even try.

Thirdly he is open to any kinds of food or activities, so he almost agree with my plans or ideas.

>> Thirdly, he is open to any kinds of food or activities, so he almost agrees with my plans or ideas.

Lastly he has a strong interest in learning and speaking foreign languages.

>> CORRECT

Thanks to him, we have little problem communicating locals who don't speak English.

>> Thanks to him, we have little problem communicating with locals who don't speak English.