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Do you enjoy meeting new people?

이진태/2024-06-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I need time to get closer when I meet new people, especially in private meetings. However, when I meet new people at work, it's easier than private meetings. Because we don't need to get closer to them; they are business partners, not my future friends.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey JT! Thank you for doing your homework! Keep it up and soon you'd be able to express yourself better in writing!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I need time to get closer when I meet new people, especially in private meetings.
>> CORRECT
OR >>It takes me time to get comfortable with new people, especially in private settings.

However, when I meet new people at work, it's easier than private meetings. Because we don't need to get closer to them; they are business partners, not my future friends.
>> However, when I meet new people at work, it's easier than in private meetings because we don't need to get close to them; they are business partners, not future friends.
OR >> However, meeting new people at work is simpler than in private meetings because there's no need to form a personal bond; they are business partners, not potential friends.