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Could you live without your smartphone (or other technology item) for 24 hours?

현무/2024-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
yes , i can , I really hope this , I really want other pepole don't call me , i want to quiet only me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Kyle! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about living without technology and I think I would agree with you to have peace and quiet just for myself.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

yes , i can
>>CORRECT
>> Yes, I can.

I really hope this
>> I really hope for this.

I really want other pepole don't call me 
>> I really don't want other people to call me;

 i want to quiet only me.
>>I just want silence, only for myself.
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