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What is your motto?

정선아/2024-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My motto is sincerity. When I work, I keep the time and rule. To be equal and justify to everyone is very important. Making royalty to someone, it takes time and turn back to me same. People depend on them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Angela! That's very sweet and thoughtful. We need more people like you in the world. Thank you for your time. Happy weekend!
-T. Sonny 
My motto is sincerity. 
>>My motto in life is, 'Have sincerity'.
When I work, I keep the time and rule. 
>>When I work, I value the time and rules.
To be equal and justify to everyone is very important. 
>>Being equal and fair to everyone is very important.
Making royalty to someone, it takes time and turn back to me same. 
>>Being loyal to someone takes time and returns to me.
People depend on them.
>>CORRECT.
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