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Uniforms may have a detrimental effect on students’ self-image

안재윤/2024-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If students have good physical appearance, only little influence the uniforms would have. If uniforms are neat enough, it also could have good effect to students' self-image. Many students dress like adults, not a student, and it doesn't look good actually.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Ms. Anna! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on uniforms and students' appearances. You make some interesting points about the impact of physical appearance and how uniforms can contribute positively to self-image.

~T. Jenna

If students have good physical appearance, only little influence the uniforms would have.

>> If students have a good physical appearance, uniforms would have little influence.

>> The impact of uniforms would be minimal if students already possess a good physical appearance.

If uniforms are neat enough, it also could have good effect to students' self-image.
>>If uniforms are neat enough, those could also have a positive effect on students' self-image.

>> If uniforms are kept spick and span, they can also work wonders for students' self-image.

Many students dress like adults, not a student, and it doesn't look good actually.

>>Many students dress more like adults than students, and it doesn't actually look good.

>>Many students dress in a way that resembles adults rather than students, and it doesn't present a good image.