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이복희/2024-06-19

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Do other people bad habits get on me nerves. Sometimes my family use my thing, and put on it other plase. When I like use that but cannot find it, I am very angry. My children!! Pleasea after use my thing let it turn back.
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Hello, Ms. Eva! I know that feeling. That's also one of my pet peeves. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny 
Do other people bad habits get on me nerves. 
>>Do other people's bad habits get on my nerves?
Sometimes my family use my thing, and put on it other plase. 
>>Sometimes, my family uses my things and leaves it on other places.
When I like use that but cannot find it, I am very angry. 
>>So, when I want to use them and I couldn't find them, I get angry.
My children!! 
>>Especially, my children!
Pleasea after use my thing let it turn back.
>>Please return them to where you got them after using.
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