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Can sadness be useful in people’s lives?

이진태/2024-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Recently, I watched the movie "Inside out". The movie said joy and sadness move together for life. That's right. sadness also need for our life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion about sadness and incorporating it in the recent movie you have seen.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Recently, I watched the movie "Inside out".
 >>CORRECT
or >> Recently, I saw the movie 'Inside Out.'

The movie said joy and sadness move together for life.
 >> The movie showed that joy and sadness move together throughout life. 

That's right. sadness also need for our life.
 >>That's right. Sadness is also needed in our lives.
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