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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Steve,
It's great to see how
thoughtfully you've considered the role of smartphones in your life. You've
highlighted some important points about their benefits and challenges. Keep
exploring ways to balance technology use with personal well-being. Nice work on
your homework!
~Teacher Cathy
Definitely,
I can and hope to live without a smart phone.
>>Definitely,
I can and hope to live without a smartphone.
I know
how detrimental to me it has been to me occasionally, esp. at night.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
am aware of how harmful it has been to me sometimes, particularly during the
night.
Smart
phone has kept me alert during the night which led to a bad performance during
the day.
>>Smartphones
have kept me alert during the night which led to a bad performance during the
day.
It is
true that smart phone can facilitate more effeciency or leisure in my life.
>>It
is true that smartphones can facilitate more efficiency or leisure in my life.
However,
there should be also some desolate parts in life caused by relentless and
indiscreet use of smart phone.
>>However,
there should be also some desolate parts of life caused by the relentless and
indiscreet use of smartphones.
Smart
phone is so fascinating that it is very hard to stand against the addiction to
it.
>>Smartphones
are so fascinating that it is very hard to stand against the addiction to them.
The
best way to keep ourselves from the negativity is to keep a smartphone off our
hands at home.
>>The
best way to keep ourselves from negativity is to keep a smartphone off our
hands at home.
Thats
because a smart phone is not usually needed at home as much as at work.
>>That's
because a smartphone is not usually needed at home as much as at work.
In
short, I confidently say yes to your question.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In
summary, I confidently say yes to your question.
Thats
what I live out all the time if possible.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
try to live by that principle whenever I can.