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김지숙/2024-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Being poor is so sad that I can't imagine because if I say I'm poor, I don't think I can lose my motivation.

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Thanks for always sharing your thoughts through your homework. See you in class!

- Teacher Angela

Being poor is so sad that I can't imagine because if I say I'm poor, I don't think I can lose my motivation.

>> Being poor is so sad that I can't imagine it. If I say I'm poor, I think I would lose my motivation.